I cannot continue to live consumed by the thought of you, the thoughts
of you that are raping my mind. My addiction to you is not healthy and
is slowly and painfully desecrating my spirit. Slay the feelings of
nostalgia I have, remove the memories that gives me this notion! I
will not be drowned by the newfangled wave of lies. I will not let
your minacious words empale my weary heart. Let me be set free by your
unwillingness to care, Let my broken wings carry me from this life,
and infused me in another. Let the weight of my habituation to your
faults be lifted. The seduction will hang with my old self by a noose
in a metaphoric closet inside myself! Where your devilish acts will be
burned at the stake, never to reappear in this life. I am rid of you!
I am finally me!
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I loved the dark tone to this one. It was intense. This is a strong feeling here, when we're to a point of near obsession and all we want to do is rid ourselves of them. I think that's why the dark nature of this piece is so striking, because in order to be free of something so powerful it can take going through hell to do it.
ReplyDeleteAm I even making sense? I'm tired tonight so forgive me if I don't :)
Hi
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful. Thanks for the comment on my blog. I'm feeling a bit better. I'm not quite myself yet. Thanks for asking though.
lovely.. theres so much u add to just a simple thing tht can make it become something so big and wonderful..u shud become a writer or something..
ReplyDelete-cris
Wow,
ReplyDeletethis is utterly beautiful!
There was so much to say and it was just so amazing.
-Xoxo
Brooklynn
i really like the concept of this.
ReplyDeleteowning your own mind again.
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One of the lines from one of my favorite songs said, "I don't want to live without reason". This reminded me of that. Freedom. :)
ReplyDeleteEffusive identity work. Good stuff.
ReplyDeletethe way you pulled it up is very effective! the idea is totally worth it :) "finally me" loved the freedom sound of it..:)
ReplyDeletewhew...sounds lik eyou had an exorcism to get out of that relationship...nice word choice too....great one shot!
ReplyDeleteI relate to this BIG TIME. Still trying to get back to me. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteGood stark realism .... I enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Addiction or obsession is a disease. Glad you got rid of it!
ReplyDeleteenjoyed reading this...was a great share with one shot
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