You're painful, you hurt.
Its like you're holding a knife in front of you, each time we get closer, the knife sinks deeper into my heart, The closer you get the more it hurts, but the more it hurts, the more I want...
The wound gets deeper. Then you pull away, pull out the knife. Leaving me with blood-covered hands, holding a needle and thread, trying to stitch the pieces back together.
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This was so amazing-and chilling. It blended together so perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThat was exactly how heartbreak feels. It gave me the chills.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Eva. This is exactly what heart break feels like. This was an amazing post, Danny.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful description of heartbreak. =]
ReplyDeleteI was reading some of your earlier posts, you are a very talented writer. You can really paint a picture, this one in particular does an excellent job of envisioning the moment that a heart is breaking.
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