Friday, November 12, 2010

Fool

When your head tells you it shouldn't hurt, though your heart say it
does. Do you just your head, or your heart?
Am I the only one who sees it that way. It's not much, just enough for
me to think twice. I don't want to analyse it, because it'll only
worry me more.
Will they think you're stupid? Probably.
But at least it's out there.
A person that asks is a fool at first, a per that doesn't is a fool
forever... What kind of fool are you?
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 17, 2010 at 10:10 AM

    I personally would go with what the heart says...

    In the second line, did you mean to say Do you trust your head... (instead of ...just...?

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  2. BubbaNovember 18, 2010 at 2:34 AM

    Better to be a fool for love than for just for yourself. Nice One Shot, Danny!


    P.S. - Don't 'text' your poems. The gaps are too distracting.

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  3. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 18, 2010 at 12:11 PM

    Hi Danny

    Interesting verse.. thanks for sharing.. I enjoyed it...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  4. JingleNovember 24, 2010 at 3:45 PM

    vivid capture of the different messages from head and heart..
    lovely poem.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    Are you alive?..
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